Wednesday, February 6, 2013

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 21


Performance enhancing drugs, such as steroids, should not be allowed in sports. They should not be allowed in sports because the TRADITION of sports is to have fun and be normal and have no drugs in sports. PRIMARILY, if someone is on drugs it's not fair because they have an advatage over the opposite team. Over a PERIOD of time, athletes have been using more and more peformace enhancing drugs to make them bigger faster and stronger. Performance enhancing drugs should be banned and sports should test their athletes on a regular basis.
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2 comments:

  1. Ms. PriesterFebruary 9, 2013 at 8:37 PM

    Isiah, you did a good job of incorporating the vocabulary words into your paragraph. I want you to work on following the sophomore format and writing more specific concrete details.

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  2. ErikaMarch 19, 2013 at 1:30 PM

    Good job with your paragraph. The way you applied the vocab words was really good.

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